Reviews for Wonders of Life
invalid id chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Good as always
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
nice work yet again
axica chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
this comes off sounding so optimistic and innocent especially with the repeating words
but on a closer look one knows that the subject sees darker things in life
great job
Spanish Dreams chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Interesting poem. I like the repetition of "wonder".
Todd Scott chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
A very illustrated summary of what's probably nearly everyone's perspective on life at one point or another, subconsciously or not.
Great writing! You should go more into that style of poetry if you haven't already.