Reviews for You´re Dying Away
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
EXTREMELY POWERFUL ENDING! I loved this so much. You are an awesome writer with description and emotion. Very well written!
Samantha-1434 chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Awesome this is defantly the best poem that I have read on this site so far lol. Not that I have read that many lol.
Ikuisuuden Teiden Kulkija chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
Really dark...But I really like this.
One of your best, I think :)
decayinglife chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
wow, i love this one, very interesting, were you writing this as a killer, a "god", the devil, demons, or a subconscious?
A.D Williams chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
"You can be Satan's little whore, no one loves you anymore"
I was ammused by that line lol.
This was an awesome poem Nina! It was extremely different from all of your other poems and songs. (in a format sort of way) but I think that that's what made it even better. The fact that it's one on it's own.
awesome work!
CyanideKiss chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
I enjoyed this. Probably cuz I'm a sucker for dark poetry haha. But still, great poem. You do indeed have a macabre mind.
NeuroticGothicLolita. too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Pretty good. Almost surreal.
Spanish Dreams chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
This is a VERY interesting take on suicide. Usually, poems about this theme are from the eyes of the person committing suicide. This is more of a condemnation of the person who is committing suicide. Almost as if the speaker is a demon (or inner demon) speaking to the suicidal.
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 7/29/2004