|Reviews for The Elementals|
| HeartbreakersHorizon chapter 27 . 6/29/2007
THis is the best story that i have ever read. If someone was to make this into a movie, i would so go to see it, and probably find a way to make a copy of it for watching it on a later use. Please hurry up and get back to writing this story
| HeartbreakersHorizon chapter 21 . 6/29/2007
“Of course you big dope.” Sirena said hugging him again and kissed him on the cheek. I thought the girlfriend's name was Amanda. Need to fix that.
| ian chapter 27 . 9/20/2005
pls hurry up with that next chapter my imagination is running away with me on what he saw! its the Evil isn't it
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 27 . 9/19/2005
this is good... i like the beasts! cool!
hehe... cute cliffie... oh boy...
you really are good, and i am most definitely going to go read that other story too.. i love sequals!
and i know whatcha mean with having the ending figured out... its just the middle bit that gets ya, hey?
please do more when you can! im really liking this story, and the buildup towards the end fight is really going well! keep it up! cya! :P
| WordSarien chapter 27 . 9/19/2005
THAT'S JUST EVIL! ! ! *Grrness. . .* (Don't ask. . .)
Me: I JUST SAID NOT TO ASK! ! ! Besides, you already know!
Mark: I know, I was toying with you. *Smirks*
Me: *Rolls eyes* Anyhoo, I've G2G (homework). PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !
~Daughter of Light and Shadow~
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 24 . 8/23/2005
oh dont you just HATE writers block? comes at the WORST times...
anyway, i like the humour in this! and the way they talk is really realistic too!
bravo! cant wait for more!
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 23 . 8/23/2005
i really like this Savyas... very cool power!
alien ass kicking crew! just what i like to see! yay!
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 22 . 8/23/2005
oh, i think i get it now!
silly me... of in my own world again...
poor Donnie! but that little power thing was cool!
your writing flows so easily! wish i could do that...
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 21 . 8/23/2005
i take it Serena is what used to be Amanda?
sweet! Moon Star! cute!
and i am extremely happy you've updated! :D
| WordSarien chapter 24 . 8/23/2005
Good chapters, but I'm a little confused: Who's Serena? :s And where's Amanda? I'm probably confused because it's been so long since I've read this story. . .*mutters about her lame memory* I'm going to have to re-read this. . .
SHAKAW IS DEAD? ! ? ! 0_0 NOO! ! !
Aw, man! I've G2G. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !
~Daughter of Light and Shadow~
P.S. This is Star Elf Warrior/The Lost Fae. I changed my name again. :PAw, man! I've G
| Indigoslayer453 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
wow we ARE using the same title...hey i didnt know it was yours. my bad dude.
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 20 . 8/7/2005
ill be waiting for the next chapter!
how can i not? THIS IS GREAT!
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 18 . 8/7/2005
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 14 . 8/7/2005
these are just wonderful characters, and im really liking the donnie character. cute n funny...
and Erika! love her! cool as!
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 13 . 8/7/2005
father? whoa? did i miss something?
wow, your just twistin it every which way!
this story... it just runs so smoothly together! you've really done a great job of this!