Great story

to be honest i have read the summary of this story many times, and i always passed over it for a different story. today im glad i clicked on this story. it was well wrote, and had interesting twists included. i think my favorite character is lucus and grace. without all of your characters this story wouldn't have been half interesting as it was. i just wanted to point out you had some spelling mistakes but i was more into the plot than the grammer. please continue writing this story was a really good read.

This is awesome!

another great story, this was greatly enjoyable. great job.

This was an absolutely INCREDIBLE story! I admit, I'd seen the summary for the story before and just passed it by, and then out of boredom I clicked on it, and I am SO glad I did! This was so amazingly well-written, and the characters were awesome! I hope that this does get published, I'll look for it on the shelves some day...you should post a note on your profile if it does!

oh crap is right! This isn't good...

Okay people, only one more chapter after this one and the story will be completed. Again it will be quite a long chapter, but I really don't want to create too many cliff hangers at the end. I am considering a epilogue, cause the story does end quite quickly, but I'll have to see if I can word it properly. I really want a definitive end to this story, no sequal. I'm also hoping to get this one in print before the year is out, I already have a copyeditor working on my mistakes, so hopefully I will meet the deadline I've given myself. Later all, EJ.

Wonerful! Engrossing! I couldn't keep myself away for more than five minutes! A true masterpiece!

cool, cool, cool...

Hi all, I just passed the 100,0 word barrier, this is by far the biggest story I have written to date, and it isn't finished yet. I'm glad to see so many people still reading this story, but not to worry, the end is getting closer. Have fun, Ed.

o... this is so exciting! such a great plot! But how did Grace get trapped?

I love the story. There are a lot of spelling errors, and mixed up words (accept, except) which could be fixed to improve the over all quality of it, but it's a very good story. The idea of it is great, and I hope you update it soon!

My word. This is superbly fantastic! I love it! Keep up the good work!

Never thought of the pigmys in the mummy returns, I guess they are quite familiar, I was sort of using a mix of gremlin and goblin when I created the little beggers. I just wanted something small, in great numbers, and nasty. Still thanks for the feedback, I'll have to think of adding something else to make them more unique. Ed

yet again you impress me! the little pigmy things remind me of similar creatures in the mummy returns, have you been borrowing ideas?