Reviews for Trying So Hard to Live
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Nice. I kept on wanting to answer God to a lot of the questions _. But seriously, I liked your experimentation with repetition and a new style of writing. Good, powerful work.
invalid id chapter 1 . 8/1/2004 the questions...really like it.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
oh wow stanzas! yeay! cool poem ;)
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
Cool poem. Different from others I've read, in a good way, of course. I like it!
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
You reviewed for me, so i'll repay the favour -. Wow *claps* thats really good. There are some really deep and thought out questions in there and I like the repeating line of 'Question, question, question'.It definately adds impact. I really like the structure of it too :) keep it up.