Reviews for The Ceiling
Rachelle Spirit Boyens chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Hm... This poem could be a song. You see, it doesn't matter if it makes sense to anyone else...
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Hey, I could have sworn I reviewed this already...o_O;;
myheartyourhands chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
I found this piece of yours very intersting. I enjoyed reading it alot. It caught my attention the whole time! Nicely DONE!
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Great rythm, I like this poem alot. Well done!
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Hm, someone thinking about suicide, and yet not quite ready to quit on life? This is good. Keep it up.
Midnight Proc chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
I loved your short lines, as they created an unique rhythm. I liked how you start and end this poem with a white ceiling. Well-written poem.