This is such a brilliant story. I hope you get back to it someday. Leaving it on a cliffhanger like this is a bit cruel.

Ahhh I hope you finish this one day! It's so good!

This remains one of my favourite stories I've ever read, online or otherwise, and i just wanted to say that I still think about it (that's how fucking good it is)~

I need more.

Decided to re-read this story. Still as good as the first dozen times ;). Thanks again for having written this.

Update?

Huhuhu stop bullying!

Huhuhu shaaaane imma hug you riiight nooow!

if I must choose one character I hate the most in this story that would be Zinc. Seriously he is more trouble than worth and of course, useless.

This story is brilliant! OMG! You've got to update, please?!

Wowwwwweewwwwwwwwww im blasted away, this could legitimately be a book. It's definitely better than some books I've read. Whether you continue it or not (PLEASE DO HOLY SHIT THAT THING GOT HIS SISTER?! AND DEVON HOLY SHIT?! UGHGGGGHHHH IM DEAD) you have a lot of skill in writing and a crazy great imagination, and your story draws me in and is pretty flawless tbh imo. Aaah. I love it. I love you. I would srsly pay you to continue this if ik u in real life lmao. Have a good day!

That was scary and confusing.

Right now I am actually praying that you are already working on another chapter.
Please, its so amazing.
And you kicked the stakes up just at the right moment. You clearly know what you are doing.

Please update

So cool! Is this storx abandonned? It's been a while, and an update would be really appreciated.

Omg omg omgomgomgomgomgomg ! Why did you leave it there ! If your reading this please please update it ! I love this story toooo much you have to update it !