Reviews for Everyone Except You
Shayna chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
All of your poems are awesome!
From Your BF!
-Shayna!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
this isn't bad but i did notice several typos along the way:
"Everyone say's I'm odd" - you really don't need the apostrophe before the 2nd "s" in "says".
"Everyone tinks I'm cold" - you may want to insert the "h" in the word "thinks".
"Everyone says I'm in a crises" - you may have meant the singular form "crisis".
And finally, "Everyone lloks at me differently" - you may have meant "looks".
Aside from that, thumbs up. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!