Reviews for The habit
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
interesting. have u ever thought of making ur stuff songs? i see so much song potential in ur poems.
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
yea alcoholism among other things is one reason my dad was never around so i completely understand..great poem n keep up the good work much luv
Written In Stone chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
This is really good. Again. It talks clearly of the things that could happen when under the influence. Great job.
Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
You ever try addng music or video to this? That'd be one hell of an D.A.R.E. program(;
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
This is really well written and it express that things that can happen due to a drinking problem. I have seen this happen with my aunt and her husband. I don't want to see it again. I hope your poem shows some poeple that it's bad abd that it helps prevent it. Awesome work.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
this poem is definitely something that all individuals should read, including the youth. right, drinking not only affects the one who's doing it but also those around him/her. still i love the way you told a real-life story in the form of a poem. thanks for sharing and keep writing!