Reviews for Pictures of You
Method2thamadness chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
This is good :DDDD in like the shared stubbornness of both characters and the contrast in reasons for determination
NotJustAnotherVillain19 chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
I love the way this story was written. Its short and sweet...it really packs a punch and I feel the hate and emotion the narrator is feeling.
I was confused until the end as to what gender the narrator was. That had an effect on the story since I was trying to figure that out when I should have been concentrating on the story.
I also was confused as to why the other character would just lie there and get cut up...is he tied?
I love the last line, 'This is how I want to remember you...my pictures of you.' I think that really wraps up a good short story. I really connected with the narrator on this one. Best of luck to you and all your future writings!
Lauren
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Wow. This was a cool story.