Reviews for Drip, drip, drip
Raven-ember chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
wow, that was awesome! very deep and beautiful imagery! i likes!
Zombie Zak chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
Jordan Wagner chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
nice. another dream poem. May I reccomend poppy seeds? (Sorry. I say this to everyone.)
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Yeah, I'm the first to review this poem I liked it a lot. The repetition of 'drip' was very nice. It had nice imagery too! One thing that confused me was the last two lines. It says that 'only a single drop, but an ear piercing sound. drip, drip, drip..' To me, it sounded like the whole poem was about one drop, but you say drip three times as if there are multiple drops of blood. But maybe you meant that even a single drop, or all/every single drop had that ear piercing sound! **Keep up the great work