Reviews for after love
decayinglife chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
I liked this one too, you do very well on expressing pain throughout your poems. well done.
Amin mela lle chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
wow... that poem was very powerful. excellent discription for the emotion. it just seemed to explain all the feelings bottled up inside. all the questions, confusion and anger. they say that poetry is a reflection of the authors feelings in reality, but I can write about anything even if it has no relavence to my life... I hope in this case, the same goes for you, for that would be awful if all these emotions were yours poured out on paper over someone. if so hang in there, if the girl is not right for you, in time you will see that, and move on till you find the women for you.