Reviews for Revelations |
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![]() ![]() Beautiful story, detailed imagery. Just lovely. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit, this was amazing. And I saw the symbolism, be proud. |
![]() ![]() This is so completely awesome. I love the kind of rebirth feel at the end - and how the burning apocalypse is like a star, when they haven't been able to see any for so long. (I was reading it and thought of the nativity scene with the people following the star, and then decided maybe I was reading too much into it if I was seeing a vampire and a sort-of-fallen angel making out as a symbol for baby j.c. ;;) |
![]() ![]() Nicely written. I don't, however, really think that that relationship happened logically. I mean, I don't really see an angel that's payed to kill a vampire suddenly his "lover" like that. And I don't think they would trust each other right away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story. nice imagery. or maybe i have a god imagination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! this story has been so... so... touching, so perfect! AWSOME JOB! i'm just so sorry i busted in on the end of it! and you've got a continuim? POST IT! THANKS, THIS STORY IS THE BEST! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! this story is so awsome, and only 3 reviews? i absolutely LOVE THIS! wha! the meanings are so deep! p.s. i really like syx, can i borrow him for a while? _; awsome story, this is so good! [what can i say, i'm bad with reviews and i'm repetitive] this isn't the end, is it? CONTINUE! wha ::supermegaGLOMPofDOOM:: _ keep updating! awsome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoo...quite...disturbing... _ But I don't care! I'm a horror fan after all! And this story is GREAT! I don't understand vreader; this is an angsty story after all. But I'll just say don't listen to the "you need help" thing. I agree with vreader that you DO have a talent of describing emotions and images. But it's good. Keep it up! Just a (stupid) request from me: can you possibly write some...you know, SEX scenes. I noticed that your story was pretty safe. ~DragoraGirl PS: THis is going to my favs list |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need help, this is a dark horror story. you have a talent of discribing image's and emotions. lighten up a little. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. How do you pronouce Syx, 'cause I've been saying 'Six'. Let me know if that's off. |