i wrote something like this before, but it's shorter, packaged differently. your poems were a bit long winded for me, but theres nothing wrong with that, just not my preference. all in all this was pretty all right.

i agree with some of the reviewers that this was a tad too harsh. it's true, we are fakes, but it's part of our nature and criticising ourselves for being this way not gonna make us a super-outrightly honest person. and at times we have to be fakes for good reasons. like defending ourselves (when celebs face the media or when we need to keep our privacy) or beacause it's our job (think lawyers and politicians). so it's really not our fault that we're fakes. but i guess you wrote this in a fit of frustration so you didn't really think through it slowly...no offence dude. hope to read more of your stuff soon!

this peom of yours is differnet then the others you've written, i do understand what the poem is saying it's like when my sister was talking about people who are two faced, we all probably become this fake person because of society and it's definition of normal is i guess if thats the right word.

The message was loud and clear, however, it's a common topic. Lots of people write about fakers, so if you want it to stand out, then you should make it more unique I guess. Also, it sounded more like sentences then lines, and there's just something not poetic about it. Maybe you could be more concise and cut out the extra words. Sorry if I'm being to critical.

Made me question my identity... I've definitely thought the same thing before about people... Interesting

it's something i've often thought about myself. it's good to find someone who's put it into words before me. just couldn't seem to find a way before.

True, so true. People will try to act themselves and be open, others hide behind a wall of lies, but we have all lied to protect, impress and keep the inner self safe. We're fake, but some dont deserve to be...I do but thats another story! Great poem! couldnt say it better myself! Fallen V

good poem but thats a little harsh. we arent all fakes. I am but not everyone.

This poem is good, though I'm not quite sure I exactly agree with it, it seems to come from deep inside you, and that really matters.

I liked this. It's simple but powerful, and very introspective. And so honest!
Thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way. :D

Wow, it reminds me of the Evanescence (I'm an Evanescence fan too!) song Everybody's Fool. Very good, I enjoyed it very much!

Hey! Me and my friend read this, and thought it was very very very well written.
Ur a great writer!

hey whats up...thanks for the loads of comments...thought i'd return the gratitude:-)...anywho great poem...very insightful...but if i may...i think on good reason we as people do not show how we feel is because many of us as humans and drives instinks...that would simply put things out of order...it is simply more convinient to let go showing some of your true feelings in order to move twards some sort of balance...sorry i'm just rambling...probably not making sence either:-P... well anywho great poem

awesome poem! it's got a lot of meaning behind it, and i like that.
-your pecado-

Awesome poem, it is so true. There are things with every person that they hide and I must admit that Ihave many