Reviews for Better Than You
Pose For Me chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
This poem reminds me a lot of one I wrote a few nights back, but yours has nicer words. LOL. "With your wanting me to be the perfect daughter" When I read that line, I let a tear fall, because at first I thought of a guy who was doing all this, yet then that line came up, and I was surprised of how someone could feel the same as me towards their mother. Would it be okay, if i borrowed this poem? I'll give you copyright rights and such... Very powerful poem. *let's tear slide down her cheek*
Lina Shankar chapter 1 . 1/8/2001
Yet another poem written about my father...
Diviana Foresman chapter 1 . 1/7/2001
This was kind of confusing, but it's still good.