Reviews for Jesus On The Stairs
pointythings chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
The usual, plus a couple bonuses.I'm not sure about the line 'my man.' I'm not sure why, but somehow it doesn't ring true. Same thing with 'go away man!' Also, I'm really not at all sure I know what you're talking about, and in this case I think that's a problem. Of course, it might be just my stupid side kicking in, in which case you can ignore than that, lovely as always!Yours in writing,~pointythings~
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Still one of your more erotic poems.D.
Brigid Jamison chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
That's a really good poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your two reviews, hope you can read some more. This poem was very refreshing, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to some more!