a bit rushed, but still a very nice idea and well written.

oh... I love Kaori and Jeffery XD I love Precious and Sayyid to but Kaori and Jeffery are my favs. Lol. Poor Jeffy-poo. He'll learn to drink the blood. Great chappie, I lurved it so much. XD stopped everything to read! Poor Precious, I can tell this'll be a tear jerker! XD We're both such angst whores! Lol. GO US! Great job!

I just discovered the wonder that is this story not long ago (but as I enjoy almost everything you've written, perhaps I should have read it sooner _) and I have to say that I'm glad that I did. I love the characters a lot; they are all very unique and alluring in their own ways. It's a very interesting way to do a vampire plot, and I must say I enjoy where you seem to be taking this.

I especially liked the interaction between Jeffery and Kaori in this chapter. I felt as if we hadn't gotten enough of them in previous chapters, so I was glad to have seen some of them. It's so horrible that Jeffery can't seem to drink from Kaori! It's obvious that this is a big deal to the vampires, and I've been just praying that he could manage it since I read the part with his bonding. Grr..and you'll probably torture us with this forever, won't you? Hehe...I love it though. Anticipation is the sweetest pleasure.

Also, it's quite a profound and I'm guessing in the future difficult to overcome conflict you've chosen with the illness Precious has. I can't wait to see how you deal with it (undoubtedly with a lot of sad and sweet angst, right?). Also, the situation with Jon seems to have the potential to develop into some serious conflict, and the fact that he knew Precious before he *was* "Precious" is an intriguing contrast to the story's current events.

One little nitpicky thing that I have to add, because I'm a grammar nut: parish/perish. A parish is a church community while to "perish" means to die. It's just since they have such different meanings, I thought I should inform you. There were a couple of other grammatical errors I noticed, but they weren't anything that took away from the story at all, and I don't remember them off the top of my head.

Anyway, it was great, and I can't wait for more. I absolutely love this story.

wow! great chap, i'm glad u updated. . this was so cool and it didn't seem too short, it had lots of action to make up for it. i hope u gets lots of inspiration for yur fic 'cus it's such a great one. . hope to see more soon, the preview sounds exciting. ja ne!

i want more ! more! more!

Okay, I kinda like Precious and Sayyid a bit more now, but I still prefer Jeffrey and Kaori. I don't know, there's something about them, and I think Kaori's got an awesome sense of humour.

Fwee. xD I -love- this story. I've been reading it since the first chapter was out, but I just haven't really reviewed. I love the conflict and relationships between the characters. *pat-pats poor Jon*
Keep the good word up.

I really like this story! I just love reading fics where a vampire takes a human lover. Please continue! I'm really not interested in Precious' past, I just want to know what's wrong with him and I want MORE SEX! I also really like how you chose to dress Precious. That's so hot! Please write the next chapter soon!

I like Jeffery's character, and I'm glad that you didn't kill him off. _

I *love* Jeffery and Kaori. Aw, they're too sweet for words. Pretty cute bonding outfits too;) I actually like J & K better than I do precious and Sayyid, they seem more natural and loving. Precious makes me think of a little poodle and I'm not sure I like Sayyid, but maybe I'll warm up to him.

very good! I can't wait to hear more! It's one of the few good vamp stories!

OMG! THIS IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE STORY OUT OF ALL OF THEM! I LOVE ALL THE CHARACTERS! I so adore Jeff and Kaori, they are so freakin cute together as well as Sayyid and Precious. You HAVE to update soon, with both pairings filling it up! I wonder what's wrong with Precious . ish a mystery. Anywho, UPDATE SOON!

Good! I like it so far. But what is wrong with Precious? I want to know!

Hmm, interesting. Sayyid seems a little cold, I can't really imagine him being in love, although I guess he must fall for the boy:-) There's the indication that the relationship's different from the previous ones, or at least that's what I took Sayyid's climax to insinuate, but I guess I'll just have to keep reading as you continue!

This is good but I really want the CDRP thing up. It's gonna be the second story right? Well I love Archer. Anyway back to this. What's the boy's name? Is he just gonna be Precious? Hm. This vampire seems a bit sadistic. Next time he should prepare his "precious".