Reviews for old pain new day
Mr. Arnold chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Interesting writing from the females perspective. You made a few errors in your spelling but so do I. Many lines though you might have been able to put two of your lines in one in certain areas.
decayinglife chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Wow, this is very well written, I loved it, the pain is so real, the emotion that was put into this is very obvious. Wow, very good.