that's a very good story !god, maria's such a bitch! anyways, hope you'll update soon!a word of advice, make the chapters a bit longer.

Hey I really like the story so far. The characters are really interesting. Update soon!

She got hit by a car? Man, she's having a bad day, isn't she? Very good so far... But I wish you would update more often. *accusing glare* So, please update soon... yada yada yada... You know the drill.

-Junie

aww i'm likin the notes you give me at the begining! it makes me feel loved! . now on to the review... AH you made a cliffy... BUT goodnews is, you made Kagetenshi a bit more charming, though he's pretty swave and sexy as it is .~, not to mention he actually was somewhat humorous in this chapter! it almost makes him...*cough* dare i say it... not evil? *laughs nervously* okay okay... i know i know i just really really like him not being evil right now lol .;; as sexy and great as the evilness and darkness adds to him i can't see him being bad, at least not to her (i'm such a fluff addict) lol well correction i do, and that's what scares me... Just how bad will you make him o.O? i'm so dying to find out... But i have a feeling you're going to have the principle do something really bad to her, or it could just be my pesimistic side shining through lol anyways update as soon as you can! loved this chapter as always!

Hi! This story is interesting so far...I would like to read more. Keep it up! (PS: Longer chapters pleaz! _)

Me likey! Me likey very much! Is Ted Aya's brother or Maria's boyfriend or what? (Just wondering.) Update soon because... I said so! Heh, but seriously... Kagetenshi definitely caught my attention. I love his style! This story seems very interesting so I'll put it in my favorites to make sure that you update soon... I know where you live. (Not really) Cheers!
-Junie

I totally understand how sometimes you have to write linking chapters to get to the good ones.
Anyways, keep up the good work

hehe was Kagetenshi a bit jealous? hahaha oh well! i can't wait for you next chapter. You know... as bad as Kagetenshi could be made to be, i still kinda like the guy. Can he be like, romanticly evil? hahahaha (i tell ya, i'm a romantic at heart .) please update soon!

So far so good, I am caught into your plot now. SO... I'm waiting for it to unravle.
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UhM: NICE ONE HUH!
keep writing ! and.. KEEP UPDATING!
BYEBYE

Woosh! That's one angsty fic. Nice touch with the snake, I'll catch up when I can.

Wow i havnt used this allias in a long time anyway... The story is good so far but wow does this girl have a sucky life(well... it did say angst). I dont know if you meant to but its spelled Artemis witch to those who dont know is a greek goddess of hunting and wild beasts and twin of Apollo and daughter of Zeus.(you can flame me for being nerdy if you want...)

here is my review! . and in responce to your note at the start of this chapter: so true so true... sad but true! lol but hell at least he's cute! hahaha anyways the crazy brother-in-law was a nice touch. Nice, nice, very nice hahaha i'm really likin your story! please update soon! .

Whoa. Where did the psycho brother-in-law come from?
Anyway, keep up the good work.

hey Caipre how are u the story's relly good so far
keep writing!