Reviews for Rules To The World
pointythings chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
I'm not entirely sure what it means, but that's probably just me being stupid. Besides, it doesn't matter. Do I even have to say it anymore? You simply amaze me. All my usual comments, good and bad. I especially love that little rhyme of 'neatly, sweetly.' Very pretty. You're the best!Yours in writing, ~pointythings~
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Crazy Retasu chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
(Minor typo: "you’re" should be "your")
I really like the train of thought in this poem, the way the story progresses. The end seems the strongest, with the powerful imagery of thunder, lightning, and fire being associated with a desire to care for someone else. Very nice! _