|Reviews for This Storm|
| Kalilah chapter 8 . 2/12/2015
Falling in love with Tristan already. To be honest I was shipping Tristan and Winter before but I can tell it's a lost cause from this chapter. Oh wells, maybe I'll start shipping Winter and Zach soon.
| gyoung chapter 38 . 1/7/2015
Thanks for writing this story. It took me a while (like three days) to finish reading it, but definitely worth it! I love that you threw in there Spanish, Italian, and a bit of Russian. My mother tongue is Spanish and whenever I see it in a story, I get this huge grin on my face. And, I have to ask, have you studied Spanish and/or Italian before?
Me encanto esta historia. Te felicito, pues esta muy bien escrita y los personajes que creaste son ùnicos.
| gyoung chapter 30 . 1/6/2015
I think my heart started pounding when Winter and Zack hugged. I have a huge smile on my face. They are so darn cute. My heart is melting. I want to cry.
| heya chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I dont know why this didn't break the 1000000000000 review record.
| silentvoiceshout chapter 29 . 12/13/2013
Zack's father must have had a hand in him not writing to her ..or never gave her letters to him...
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
| Downright-Nerd chapter 23 . 7/1/2013
I just balled my eyes out reading this.
This is the first story that has ever made me cry like I just did.
I'm utterly speechless.
| FairyTaleDreams chapter 38 . 5/23/2013
Loved Zack and Winter was the cutest character ever :) Great story!
| Dominique Diane chapter 38 . 4/1/2013
I can't believe that Joshua Crowne sold the house, fired Victoria and isn't giving money to Zack! Oh dear lord, I miss Leo! Great story, took me 1 week to finish it (vacations got in my way)
| glowingstar101 chapter 38 . 12/21/2012
THIS IS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE STORY ON FICTIONPRESS (I think?) LOL this was seriously so sweet and exciting :)) great job!
| glowingstar101 chapter 8 . 12/19/2012
Winter and Tristan are so cute! Can we have them together? :)) haha but I like Zack too :p
| leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 11/22/2012
Tristan and Winter truly do think of themselves as brother and sister if they can be in that position and experience no feelings beyond kinship. For the first few chapters I imagined that Tristan might develop feelings, but if her wearing his clothes and sleeping in his lap didn't provoke certain ideas, then it is safe to assume that they will never develop romantic feelings.
Tristan was right about one thing: Zach is pursuing the wrong girl.
| leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
It seems a little weird for Winter to ask Eva if she would like to date Zack while she is wearing the boy's jacket; a little psychological puzzle there? As in: saying one thing while trying to communicate another?
| leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 11/22/2012
Will Zach become the wedge that drives Winter and Eva apart. That would be sad, especially since your summary suggests that he will be leaving soon.
| leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
Clearly Winter was bothered by Zach's unkind denial of any interest in her and his clear interest in Eva. She is a good friend, but that doesn't make her immune to an interest in boys.
Tristan and Eva's father needs to step up before he destroys his family. Both mother and father seem to have divorced their children as well.