|Reviews for Unequal On Athana|
| Mime chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
This sounds as if your talking to someone. I like the rhyme and repeatition use. Brilliant work!
| NoPoetInTokyo chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Well, it's 4am and I can't grasp the true meaning of the poem. Yet I pray everything turns out fine. Very nice poem. Shows your feelings and emotions vividly. I'm no poet so I don't have much of a right to say, but whatever works. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. God is with you.