Reviews for The chain
morbid chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
This is really good. I like it a lot. Sin is bad!
depressed elf chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
Nice Poem Nice pome!
ruined life chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Very nice I like your style!
Faerie Corpse chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Are you sure you're okay? YOU still seem a little messed up to me. JJ i love yoU! This one was really good, it describes sin really good.
suzieque2 chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
So true. I struggle with this a lot myself (winces)
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
It sounds like the person is struggling to lift the chains while he's talking. Five bonus points for style.
chocolaate puffs and all that jazz I want chocolate can you hear me I remember it clearly. Me hungry Can I sing chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Good job your poems are so good!
Beaten withered rose chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
This is really good. It seems like your describing your pain. I like it. It's really good.
x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
That was great! _ btw, sorry i made you cry (is that supposed to be a bad thing or good?) lol
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
I like it! Sounds like you became stronger throughout the poem and I like that! Really well done!
Marisa Rae chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
This is a good poem, although I'm not sure why it's rated PG.
crazy chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
This is realy good too. I like it I think you did a good job of showing what you wanted to!