Reviews for Too Far Away
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Anthoner interesting one. I like it. The last two lines are great.

til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
I liked it, especially the ending, how it just tied it all together with the simplicity of stating you're going to be lonley today.
keep writing-
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
I liked this. It seems as there was a lot of contemplation and thinking done in this poem. I guess that's what gives this poem a surreal feel to it. I also loved the sense of lonliness felt here. Nicely done. Keep up the great work.
alwayslove chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
What a great poem! You should get some of your stuff published, i'd buy it! Keep up the good work! It's inspiring and refreshing to see something other than bad teenage poems that have no meaning!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
"I going to be lonely today" I'm?
i like this. longer than your usual but thats perfectly fine ;) i find it nice and a good title.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Intresting, it's kind of abstract in a way that its real yet its not. Keep up the good work.