Reviews for Bring me back to life
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
it was good. i liked it a lot.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
yeah, i can relate... but that was a long time ago, so i'm over that time now. beautifully conveying of thoughts that do cross the mind.
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
i've been there too many times...in fact last time i was really there was only a month ago n it was the only time in my life i was truly scared so yea i get it much luv
Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Very Good. I thought thet were dead at first. But I like how you sort of wean the fact that she still alive until the reader really understands whats going on in the end.
AND it's well written)
Kujos
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
This is really well written. I can relate to it alot. Great job
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
i feel this way right now..loved the 1st and last stanzas the most. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Compared to some of the stuff I've read here that was a sunny poem :) Nah but it was very good and you made this empathicly-challenged reader feel the emotion. Well done.
Stones decay, words last
Nick
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
A shallow grave
Is where I lie
Love is now meaningless
As I slowly cry
- I love those lines, you have a lot of passion in this peice, it was very touching for the reader, keep up the good work.
Juliet.