|Reviews for Bring me back to life|
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
it was good. i liked it a lot.
| AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
yeah, i can relate... but that was a long time ago, so i'm over that time now. beautifully conveying of thoughts that do cross the mind.
| Raven Gray chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
i've been there too many times...in fact last time i was really there was only a month ago n it was the only time in my life i was truly scared so yea i get it much luv
| Space-ghost-boy chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Very Good. I thought thet were dead at first. But I like how you sort of wean the fact that she still alive until the reader really understands whats going on in the end.
AND it's well written)
| Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
This is really well written. I can relate to it alot. Great job
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
i feel this way right now..loved the 1st and last stanzas the most. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Compared to some of the stuff I've read here that was a sunny poem :) Nah but it was very good and you made this empathicly-challenged reader feel the emotion. Well done.
Stones decay, words last
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
A shallow grave
Is where I lie
Love is now meaningless
As I slowly cry
- I love those lines, you have a lot of passion in this peice, it was very touching for the reader, keep up the good work.