Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This is by far my you describe your 'world' is very unique...not something many people do, but the way you've accompanied came out's awesome!

Morbid Maxwell
Typist chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Eh. Pretty good. Not quite my thing, but I like it.
Eternal Gabreille chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
that is a good poem I enjoyed it
JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
This is wonderfull great i love it blagh blagh reapeat what i said to you in real life.
NoneoftheAbove-0 chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
Very good; wonderfully written. Excellent!
the duck in the rain chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
(bows) I have absolutely no words to describe are an amazing poet my friend...and my self-esteem is taking a nose-dive into the negitives...
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I am sitting here speechless at the, this is amazing. The imagery and flow of this leading up to the end is perfect. And the end, very true. Great job on this...and thanks for the dedication. Keep Writing