Wow, I love this story even though It's funnier when you tell the story you gate jumper jim b/c your pretty scrony(just you really are a great writer,I hope you realise that(how could not with all the reviews.(p.s your stealing valuable reviews from the rest of J/K!Keep it up Squirrel!And be sure that when I put my new stories out I'm going to take some of your reviews.(I wish!)

this story could go on and on and I hope it does it's hilarious

not enough killing and blood. lol

For some reason when I read the summary I thought this would be akin to "End of Eternity" by Isaac Asimov, don't know why, but I did. Thankfully it was more humorous to read, made me smile and relish in the idiocy of great Crocodile Beasts.
Katlyn