Reviews for Money Behind the Clock
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
To me it sounds like a man focusing his whole life on his job, saving money for the future, when in reality, his is using the future to hide from the present. I like this.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
oops didnt review this yet. pshft! bad me... well reviews now! muhahaha! honestly, i didnt get it... :( sorry. i think it has meaning and is good. i just dont get it...
lisaslife chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Short and sweet. I picture an old man waiting for just the right moment to truly live, and not realizing the moment is now. Good work, I like all your poems, you are a truly good writer.