Reviews for Dragon Wings
regalsita chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Fantastic. Usually rhyming sounds forced and limits the poetic genius of the concepts that are being thrown into the air, unless of course, you are Shakespeare or Milton - but, you have managed to make the rhyming add to the poetry, rather than take away. I have trouble with that myself and I admire your talent. Congrats.
tastes like love chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
This reminds me of the dragon riders of purn books. It's a great poem, I love the way it flows, it totally works.
DarkFairie.RogueSpirit chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
This is a good poem I love to read things that are fantasy.
Well written
Dark Fairie
krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
hmm, kinda sad, but i liked it. didn't really get till the end but it's cool.
~later
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
WOW. I like the fantastical quality in your poem- you've woven your words to great effect- so that we can actually SEE the imagery. Great work!
nightdragon0 chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Definitely seems to have lots of stuff going on in the scene, and the dragon is a nice 'bonus', heh.
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
This is fantastic! the inagery is wonderful. Depressing but amazing. Wow...* superb.
sorry...that sounds cheesy but its wonderful.
Fallen V
PoisonedWine chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
oh, wow. you weren't kidding when you said this was depressing! but it's so good, i love it!
Bloodlust chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Great peom. I really like the images in this poem. very nicely done.
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I lovew it! Brilliant imagry! You described it all perfectly! And the rhyming was excelent! Well done!