I loved this story immensely!

awwwwwwwwww finally! It was a sweet :)

OH GOD.
I'm squealing and laughing and crying at the same time! SO SWEET! SO ADORABLE! SO TOUCHING! God, my heart is melting! Thank you for writing this amazing story!

Great complicated story, i was definetly not expecting this and kyles character seemed to change from the beggining where he had elva and shelby tied up and wanted to more than kiss suggestively against her will to the guy not wanting to take her innocence to guy who must always do it with her. Great story. :)

I'm very excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to finish it!

After sitting through your entire story...you don't tell us who killed Evan or how the custody battle went? Did you forget that you introduced those issues?

i only just stumbled across this and all the reviews are from 2009 :P but this is absolutely amazing, i fell in love with it! im so sad its over D:

Loved your Story.

Loved this story ]

this story was absolutely adorable ! you deserve x4 more reviews than you have right now ! i love this story. Amazing work !

To be honest the beginning was iffy. And the whole stepbrother thing was not something I wanted to read about. I can't stand that angle or things like that. And the whole them kidnapping people and her in an alley seemed so far fetched and it was kind of ridiculous. But I decided to keep reading and I'm glad I did! Because your writing got SO much better, and the story got better too. Thank goodness no more of that Jed being in love with her crap. I loved her and Kyle and their love. You really improved! And I'm glad I read your story.

This was a wonderful story, however what happened to Jessica?

Huggles & Cheers,

Mi

Elva has a awesome sharp tongue nice job on insulting Lebrun asshole hehe. Lebrun is cool but his personality is a total cock

ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY LOVED IT!

Amazing story. This is probably one of the best stories on the website. Good job.