heya, i absolutely love this chappie. but you know what? i'm really hoping that he doesn't get married. and seeing as i know you're a sucked for happy endings and have said he'll come back i'm wondering why he comes back, and if he's married or not when he does come back. so i'm just wondering if elva gives him a reason to come back more than him loving her and vice versa. so now i'm wondering if she's pregnant...because that would be a big twist to the story. it was lovely of him to give elva that ring. i can't wait for more so please update soon if you have time. merry christmas, happy new year, i hope you have a great time for both ~ Alenor.

well let me first say that i love your story. And im so glad that your still writing it because a lot of the writers here have a tendency to leave stories incomplete. But you have managed to stick with it. Anyway, this was a good chapter but the one criticism i would give is you repeated many of your words such as glacier and iceberg. But other than that it was great...though so depressing and sad. I feel sorry for elva, shes so empty now that he left...well i hope you update soon cause i cant wait to see if Kyle actually gets married

This chapter was emotional, bittersweet infact , I did not dislike it in the least actually it helped in clearing things up somewhat in what direction there relationship was heading as far as if he would leave or not . and he did making it bittersweet for me anyway having the glimmer of hope he wont leave but knowing he will, which is great writing skill on your part because its what Elva is going through having that hope inside her even if it was false hope that he wouldnt leave . I also enjoyed the fact that you didnt have there last night just going at it like in most stories they do , it was good to see they took advantage of the last day together getting to know each other in am emotional way not just physical. I applaud you for antoher well wriitten chapter and i do look to read another chapter .

oh my gosh.

i started crying this chapter.

wanna know why?

IT WAS SO COINCIDENTALLY FREAKY!

Goodbye My Lover by James Blunt started to play.

and i was like "omg!"

but the story is beautiful, poor elva though.

Kyle...such a sweetie.

I fell in love with his character.

And Elva..fell in love with her too.

Cute story.

Loved it.

Izzie

PS - the goodbye my lover thing was really not my fault, i had no doing in that...just happened. so coincidental and scary...yet so romantically cute!

This chapter was phenomenal!

OMG I was crying. that was so sad.

I Find your story refreshing , i love the story line and the interaction between your characters its definetly refreshing though i have to say that i tend to get frustrated with it for the fact as a reader i havent been able to grasp where there relationship is going and that is strangly what i love about it at the same time , it keeps me guessing will they be together in the end or will they break up or will she get pegnant for some reason i think she will the pill doesnt all ways work anyway thats just me but i praise you for a well written story and i hope to read more soon

hehe too lazy to sign in so THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! _ i love this story so much! well uhh there's not much to say hehe 'cept UPDATE SOON XD hehehe

I've read your story from the beginning starting starting earlier yesterday afternoon and I absolutely LOVE this story. It has a lot depth and the characters are very well developed. I think you know how hard it is to make multi-dimensional characters like Kyle and Elva. I'm curious however what's happening with Elva's biological mother and if there is anything more coming up about Evan's murder? Despite me being a die hard romance addict, I adore a good mystery subplot. Can't wait for future chapters! Once again I applaud your work!

Damn. I got to pass all the other cliffhangers. Why couldn't you not leave me hanging? Not cool.

I must say that I love this story, and, though I hate to admit it, its cliffhangers. My favorite character died, like normal. I guess I am actually starting to like that, or expect it? Anyway, I am concerned where this story is going. When is the court case going to come in? It has been a long time since Elva saw or heard from her in a while. I want that death investigated, understandbly.

The only thing that can be commented on is the slowness. I love what you have got, but that says nothing for everyone else. We know the controversy, but now we have got to get to it. We need to see what is going to happen once he leaves, what is going to happen with Elva's mother, etc.

Please, I am screaming in frustration. Update soon.

So excited. I wonder what the surprise is ) Love this chapter!

great story! love it so far, and i keep getting so caught up that I forget to review!

I cant remember which chapters it was, I beleive the last one,(19) and one a couple before that, where is an inconsistency in Kyle's cars... I don't know if you noticed... The first chapter it says he has a ferrari, and then the last chapter is says he has a mustang... While both awesome cars, they are nowhere near similar, not only in engine, but in price tag... Just thought I would let you know on that one, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

it was getting really interesting and i'm sitting here wondering whats going to happen whats going to happen and you cut it off ah you plz write the next chapter soon

More!

hm...ok what is kyle doing that he doesn't want to do? i can't wait for more, this chappie was great ~ Alenor.