| Reviews for The Path of Love |
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   kat6528 chapter 17 . 7/27/2005 OMG! can't wait for the next chapter! |
| DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 17 . 7/27/2005 Elva's mother is..really..reeallyy..SCARY. Eep. It seems as if she wants to abuse Elva . She must smell like smoke without all that perfume, huh? So what's Kyle's secret that he won't tell Elvaa? I WANT TO KNOW. And Elva loves Kyle! How adorable! Jesse's so hilarious. Continue soon! |
| P.M chapter 17 . 7/27/2005 This one time at Band Camp..just joking with you! Finally, you have another chapter up, I was getting worried that you would leave it unfinished like some stories that I have read in the past. I wonder why Kyle is so restraining, do you think it's Liz or his parents that are the reasons why he so restraint with Elva. Well, you are the author, so keep up the good job and good luck. Bye. |
| Underestimated chapter 17 . 7/27/2005 Don't you dare leave us all hanging like that! AGH! You wouldn't want anybody to die from not knowing what happens next wold you? Ahem. Please excuse my oddities here. I'm just hyper for some reason. Keep up the updates. I'm reall enjoying the story. And I'm really curious about Kyle's reasons for not touching her. |
| moonlighthared07 chapter 16 . 7/26/2005 hey i love you story its so good keep it up |
| d r e a m z z chapter 16 . 7/16/2005 aww.. thats sad... i would love to read your story sooner... but i guess i can wait till the end of july.. i hope that liz could just back off..and break the engagement too... then kyle and elva can be together... jed's gonna get over his crush on elva right.. they just don't sound right together... but anyways, your story really is sweet... soo.. yep! update soon! |
| UNwitty182 chapter 11 . 7/13/2005 plz undate soon |
| LosingIt chapter 16 . 7/13/2005 Love the story! You did a great job! Update soon! |
| oohsnapp chapter 16 . 7/13/2005 I LOVED IT! UGH Okay, this might be a long review cuz I haven't reviewed the other chapterse (which I'm really sorry for, but I'm just too caught up in the moment.. Heh...) Anyways. I can't believe that SHES FALLING FOR KYLE! Yeah, I would really want her to fall for him IF HER BRO DIDN'T LOVE HER! I mean, what IS that? I feel so sorry for Jed! Like, COME ON! He LIVES with her and he has to see her MAKING OUT with Kyle! I'M SO TORN BETWEEN THE TWO! I think that Cissy should go with Jed but I also want Elva to go with Jed too! But I WANT KYLE TO BE WITH ELVA! Ugh, this is so confusing! See? Erm, I think that you should put Jed's POV there for a while and make him fall for Cissy ). So and then Kyle and Elva can be together. I LOVE YOUR FREKIING STORY AND YOU SHOULD UPDATE as soon as you can, _. Keep up the fantastic work! (and I hope that you don't bring more guys into this.. P) |
| John'sGirl4-26-06 chapter 16 . 7/9/2005 Hey yea i really like ur story i had to re-read it tho. cuz i havent been on fictionpress in like forever cuz i went to florida for vaction. but i love ur story even more now that i re-read it keep it going the story is AWESOME! |
| JT FAN chapter 16 . 7/4/2005 what is it that jed promised he wouldnt tell her?i absoltely love this story and cant wait to read the next please update soon. |
| DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 16 . 7/4/2005 I FEEL SO BAD FOR JED! It's depressing. And poor Elva, she must be feeling very hurt! Continue soon! |
| slowlydancingtothestars chapter 16 . 7/2/2005 *sigh* so sad |
| CrystalDusk chapter 16 . 7/2/2005 aww... poor jed. whats he gonna do? |
| Aster-Twilights chapter 16 . 7/1/2005 Great chapter. I just love Kyle being a bad boy and yet I like Jed too! Hope you have fun in China and update as soon as possible! |