Wow! This is great! I can't wait until the next chapter!

yay! Now write the next chapter:)

That was an awsome chapter. It's a cool addition that kyle did drugs. i'm starting to hate rick more and more and more. And liz is just evil. I so don't want kyle to marry liz THERE HAS GOT TO BE A WAY OUT! Nice chapter PLZ update soon.

hythx for the update

Another great chapter I hope Jed and Cissy will end up together~

Well, I'm not going into detail about just how aggrevated I am right now. To make a long story short. I had written this perfect review for you and then my computer decided to freeze up. Now I have to start from scratch again.

My confusion about Jake and Rick being the same person has cleared about. Thank you so much for that and you're right Jake does seem to be a good person. When will that Rick learn to quit?

I mean hello you have to be a lowlife scumbag of a criminal to slip a rueffy in to a girl's drink just so you can take advantage of a girl. What's his deal with hating Kyle so much anyway?

I like how Jake tried to get steer Rick away from Elva. I would have liked it better if he had been more determined to stop Rick from doing anything.

Well, I'm glad Elva didnt pretend to have memory loss. It's good to be truthful in situations like the one she was put in.

I'm not surprised that Kyle had dabbled in drugs. It's usually the attractive, popular, playas, jocks, who end up eventually partying hardcore. I'm also surprised to find out that Jed and Kyle were actually more then civil to each other right up until Kyle started using drugs. I think it's admirable that he has stopped using drugs too.

Well, Jed is becoming my least favorite character in the story. Rick was number one, Jed nuber two and Peter number three. Now Jed and Rick have switched places.

How could he not be open about how terrible Harrison can be before she started there. It doesn't seem fair that he keeps secrets from her while she tells him all hers and then expect her to feel the same way about him that he does her.

I like how Kyle is protective of Cissy when his parents could care less about them. It gives him more loveability.

I also like how Elva is going to try to team up with Cissy to get their brothers to get along. I can't wait to see how that plan works out.

Anyway this was a beyond speechless praise chapter. I really LOVED how there was so many different issues in multiple layers. This is what I call a diverse multilayer, multi-issue literary work. Keep up the great work. There aren't enough positive adjectives in the English and British dictionaries for me to describe how much I loved this chapter. I REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER (hehe) Please update soon.

BTW thank you so much for the shout out. It was really nice of you to try to answer my questions.

Yay! So glad to se another chapter! I love this story. Altho now I am very very curious as to what happened with Kyle and so on...

Awesome ) Have I ever mentioned I love your story? :P:P hahah ) KEEP IT UP! I love the interaction between people in this chapter.

Wow. Kyle is the biggest jerk ever. How could she ever like him? I guess I'll find out.

Just a heads up, I was kind of confused when he kissed her and then removed the duct tape. He was kissing her with the duct tape on? O_o Kind of strange, but interesting chapter.

Good chapter. I know how Elva feels, being in band myself. The seniors do try to assert their authority sometimes, but usually it goes pretty well.

I'm off to read some more.

Wait I'm confused. Is Jake the bartender really Rick? Or did Rick pay Jake to drug Elva's drink?

Anyway enough with the questions and on to the gushing! Yea! Kyle finally found a way to get Elva to hear his apologies.

That Damn Liz she should be erased. Gr! She just makes me wish she were real so I can knock some sense into her. What even makes her think he was talking about her?

Poor Elva she was so hopeful until Liz came and ruined the moment. Ah I love how Kyle finally got away from Liz and went in search of Elva. See I knew there was more good than bad in him. I loved how he was struggling with his self-control during the car ride back to Elva's house and while settling her into bed, so she could sleep off the effects of the drugs and alcohol.

This story just keeps getting more interesting and I keep getting hooked. Please update very soon.

hey i just love this chapter i really hope that u'll write more very soon

That is so sweet! I love him now! *sigh*

can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww, how adorable. :) Please write more!