Reviews for The Serpent of Truth
A Heart of Blades chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
I don't think I really understand the full meaning of the poem. But it's definitely interesting and a poem I enjoyed.
SweetWithUncertainty chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Interesting poem...its weird how you never can run away from the truth...Keep writing TK
Your friend,
SwimmerGirl
Coping Mechanism chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
That's really good. And all very true. You messed up a line though:
"It's always there where you like it or not "

shouldn't "where" be "whether"?