|Reviews for Where the day takes you|
| Camille chapter 15 . 9/28/2005
Great chapter - the school marriage project has turned out very interesting. I wonder how many schools would let a teacher make it so realistic, with same/sex couples and single parents? Also the conflict between Jamal and his mother is nicely done, but we need to see how Mika feels about it too.
| Camille chapter 14 . 9/21/2005
Very interesting - the school 'marriages' should be a challenge! And I liked the idea that they would include same-sex relationships. (Did they match up guys, too?)
The conflict with the parents dating and complicating Jamal's situation with Shamika is well done, too - although if his mom really thinks she can put two teenagers in bed together and nothing's going to happen, I suspect she's from another dimension.
| Camille chapter 13 . 1/20/2005
I can sympathize with Jamal, trying to fit back into normal life after all that. Really liked the humor in this -and liked seeing Shamika and Myriah being friends, and poor Mark falling off his chair. A very nice interlude after all the recent trauma.
| DragonAiua chapter 12 . 12/30/2004
well, I finally got to chapter 12 :-) all I can say is update soon! I'm hooked.
| Cmar chapter 12 . 12/28/2004
Well! Very interesting. Glad to see both Jamal and Shamika finally know what they want, but things aren't exactly settled between them. Also a nice twist with the parents; that's shaping up as a dramatic situation, and I can understand how Jamal and Shamika feel about it. Very good work!
| secret ninja chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
Wow, I was looking this story up again cause' I hadn't seen it in a while...pretty powerful stuff, I hope Jamal wakes up and he and Shamika get together, keep up the great work.
| cmar chapter 11 . 12/10/2004
Very very good! I have a couple of tears in my eyes right now. Some beautiful scenes, and I like that you have Shamika and Myriah being friendly. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Myriah chapter 11 . 12/1/2004
Great chapter :) I felt so bad for everybody! I'm so glad you updated, I was waiting for it :D This was a little rushed, I think it could have taken up at least another chapter, but it was well written and I enjoyed it.
| Myriah chapter 10 . 11/23/2004
Whoa. . . UPDATE SOON! I have to know what happens :) I'm glad you've started this up again, I missed your updates :( Great work once again :D
| cmar chapter 10 . 11/22/2004
Oh my gosh, a great cliffhanger, and a great payoff after the hints about Omar. Also I'm glad to see Jamal come to his senses, even if it may be too late! This isn't a tragedy, is it? I hope not.
| str8t4ward chapter 9 . 11/3/2004
I loved can't wait to read the rest!
| DISChessPlayer chapter 9 . 10/30/2004
Your writing style is one which I love. You are doing a great job with character development, and surprising us, even though we know what is coming. The plot is multi-dimensional, but not scattered all over the place. Your grammar is very good, making it easy to read. Overall, you are doing very well, keep it up!
| cmar not pressing my luck chapter 9 . 10/23/2004
Whew, nice chapter! I like the idea of the talent contest, you've used it to good effect to bring out some smoldering conflicts. Hate to think of what the big dance will do!
| Myriah chapter 9 . 10/22/2004
Hey Rick, great job! My computer finally lets me review. Love this story, it's really going great. Glad to see other people appreciate that too.
| Aphrodides chapter 9 . 10/22/2004
Awe, how sad. I could feel how upset she was. Please update soon!