|Reviews for Tell Me That Its Ok|
| pointythings chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Another stunning piece from juliet! All my usuals; great lining, eloquent wording, powere and grace all through. Also my usual skepticism about the lining in places. One other thing: the ending is inferior. You take a beautiful poem and end it with a clumsy clunk. I'm disappointed in you! Find a better way to wrap it up, would you? You and I both know you're better than that pathetic ending. (I'm talking about the last 3 lines.)
Yours in writing,pointythings
| D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
| Brigid Jamison chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Very good and strongly written. Of course, this poem is just as powerful as all your others. I enjoy reading them alot and love the romance you bring into each of them. Thanks for reading mine too!