Reviews for Wounded Wanderer
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
This one is perfect. I love the descriptions and emotions that were mixed together to create this beautiful peace.

Keep writing,

your work always brings a smile to my face.
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Another Josh piece. I love how you've mixed it up on this sight, you shift each poem to another guy, and then back again. It really deversafys it.D.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Drips of blood
and emotion
were falling from you face.
i really like that line. it's a great visual. i really like this one and the meaning.( or my verison of the meaning)
evilDif chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
What a beautiful piece we have here, I love your words and the story. I must say, though, it bothered me a bit to read one-two word lines. I'm a culprit of this as well, but I think that the sentences would read better if they were all in one piece. The last four lines for example: "But no, only the safey that flows from within by breast." Just a thought.
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Wonderful imagry in this poem! I like it! Well done!
ADreamer'sCurse chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Just reading that can give anyone a sense of comfort. Such a beautiful poem, please continue to write more!
A Dreamers Curse
Nao K. Kawasaki chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
I like it! It's easy to read, unlike some poems, (probably mine couont as the hard to read ones...) Anyway, it's good, and it's sad too...