Reviews for Silk Paradise
muhahahaha chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
i read it! i Read it, i read it! in class, and THE peoples were all up ins!
Rabit157 chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
That's really beautiful. I don't know weather it's intentional but The fomat seems like a billowing skirt.
A cunning and ambiguous poem.
Xandria Nirvana chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
cute. and a good question
Pico the Great chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Oh I like it! I dunno why, I do, but I do!
It's got great description, goods color-words, and not too verbose.
Good job!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Aw, that was so sweet! The play of the colors hooked me up instantly. And I loved the last line. A touch of vanity in it, but who cares?
Lovely. Simply lovely.
And thanks for the reviews.
Freckles Victorious chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
Tolkien is a smurf! okay, that was my password... but now I'm going to change it so ha! and goodly poem. makes you think. i likes the ending.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
It is a very good idea to have a question on the bottom of a poem.
If you have a follow up poem to give another idea of silk path to paradise; maybe a poem titled "A Silk Path to Paradise?"?
After slippers you should have a different puctuation.
I think it sounds better if the word and was removed from in front of chestnut.
Butt I will leave it up to you.
Moira Lenore chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Fantastic! I love the idea. Nice job.
Stormer chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
This was a beautiful description that invoked a lot of different images in my head. I imagined some woman of the Renaissance, walking around with her body aching horribly as a result of the clothes she wore. I also really like how the poem looks on the page - sort of like a triangle. Well, I dunno what sort of shape it is...triangle but what kind? (one side vertical, the other diagonal...)
Grey Faerie chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Fantastic! I love it. Both deep and colourful...just brilliant. Great job!