I think that u should just stop judging yourself and just keep going, keep writing, post it as you go no matter how much you hate it and then you can go back and edit it all later

That being said I love it I love the characters and the way they interact with each other and I wish that u would post more often but I also understand that you do have a real life that gets in the way so thanks for giving us what u can

this is lovely! I really like that Josh is comfortable with Kays kid. I really really liked this one. I can see how they, Kays kid and Josh became who they are later.

this update made my day! thx

Psh, this chapter was actually fantastic and I'm so happy yoive updated because I love all of your characters. It's so nice to see Josh warming up to Kay and Nicky.

What the hell... WHERE IS DAN?!

... the ending was well he completely deserved that and Josh is seriously being a huge ass jerk. uinjdck I mean he doesn't even bother to fix things with Dan first and I hate characters who are unaware someone like them for gazzilion chapters before they find out and go "oh!". And after he makes Dan so upset he just leaves and hunts down Jenssen!? hsdszjkci At first I was like ok as long as he doesn't go back to Kay since I have no idea why but I don't want them to end up together (yes I am still all for Dan and Josh or at least Dan getting a good partner at the end. I mean he must!) but poor DAN!

AHHH can't read this I need Dan and Josh! Don't take offence that I skimmed/skipped over this chapter after reading the first 2 paragraphs... :P

AHHHH NOOOO! I knew it was inevitable but I prefer Dan and Josh way more! uifszcnaiu I am probably the only one still rooting for them but we can all see that Dan does have feelings for Josh and he's always there for him. Now I don't really want to continue reading now (especially the next chapter) but I have to find out what happens to Dan later in the story! Also I don't really like how Josh never had sex with anyone since Kay left since that makes him a little needy (?) of Kay whereas I like more independently strong characters. But after saying all that I do like Kay as a character for being mature and all but still...*sigh* I want Dan and Josh!

That really was uncalled for from Kay... I'm still shipping Dan and Josh so I love how they stick up for each other in this chapter! The beginning of the chapter made me laugh so much when Josh supposedly killed of Kay :P Oh and Tara is seriously started to get on my nerves with all her manipulation and her getting into other people's business though sometimes she isn't that bad. Really like the story so far and the bits of humour in it!

I am completely rooting for Dan and Josh at this point though they aren't even officially a couple. it doesn't seem like they are going to be anytime soon since it all seems like a set up for Josh and Kay which I know will be inevitable but NO! I think Dan really likes Josh and Josh really cares for him in turn but Dan's burying his feelings for Josh with drugs which is not good. I hope you develop their relationship and that they hopefully start dating for a little bit *cross my fingers*. Oh and I just discovered your writing and this story is preventing me from sleeping but keep writing!

I like that Josh finally gets the strength to confront his dad although he definitely needs to have more sessions with his therapist. Life will get better! :) I would love to see more Nicky-Josh interactions.

it feels strange to see James like this but Im glad that Josh stood up and faced him. It fits his behaviour in this. I wonder if his dad will appear again and I also wonder why Kays dad invited James.

I've just spent the last 3 (4?) days reading this whole series and you know... I'm 100% hooked.

I sort of never want it to end xD But yeah, just wanted to say that you're a fucking genious, please never stop writing.

I did not expect the confrontation, and you can tell it was improvised. Although the fact that is was so... "genuinly" surprising just made it that much better. It gave the story an interesting twist, and I hope you'll keep building on that twist. I liked this chapter, and I must say the confrontation was needed. Keep it up, because (I've said this before and I'll say it again) this is a great story and I look forward to reading more.
Keep it up

Well, if it was unintentional, it certainly makes it feel like Kay's father is one of those master planners of the universe for having invited Josh's dad and then hinted that Josh could come. It definitely reads like that now. P

So, anyway, good chapter. Your self-criticism can calm down a little. ;)

Wow, this story is so good! I discovered it today- read from ch. 1. I'm honestly a Dan/Josh all the way, even though I know there is a slim chance of that happening...
Anyway, I really like this story and how you developed both characters with alternating viewpoints and kept them true to their character. I never thought 'This sounds like Josh...' when it was from Kay's perspective, and I know how hard it is to keep their personalities distinct. You are a very talented writer! Also, I like how you don't reveal everything about Josh from the beginning... and much of Josh and Kay's past relationship is also fuzzy- but that's what makes it so interesting because I'm dying to read more and more, hoping to understand a little of their long and complicated relationship. Their personalities and character development has given me many clues of what they used to have and what happened between them.
Gosh, can Josh be any more insensitive to Dan? Dan's my favorite character thus far! :) Good job, and I'm excited for the next update.