As always I love Nicky. It's still amazing how much Kay mayured and how much he cares about Nosh and not wantin to ever use violence to get his point across... Then again I'm sure Kay learned patience when dealing with a toddler Nicky. :) I can't wait for the next chapter and seeing Josh realize that he can turn his life around.

I truly love Kay and Josh. Your stories about them are amazing. I'm definitely addicted and greedily read each chapter with adoration. Thank you for creating such an interesting and lovely story arc.

Yay new chapter! I like your stories, and hope you'll keep continuing this keep it up!

D'AW. You updated. Hooray!

I'm really liking the way you portray Josh as whiny, haha. It's realistic. I think way too many writers show their characters as totally self-confident and never doubting themselves, when this is totally unrealistic.

More? More? More?
-Liv

tara's ringtone is clearly "barbie girl."

Hurr. This'll be the last one from the Review Marathon (link in my profile!) coz... IDK. Coz I'm tired. I'll be back later with more detailed reviews and stuff.

I like the champagne glass art. It was really creative and funny.

I also like how Dan started taking pictures of him shirtless, haha, because it really showed his ADD side and was good characterization.
-Livia

His father's character is still a bit confusing for me. He's like, mean, joking, and supportive in different places. It's hard to pinpoint him.

I love Kay as a daddy, haha. It shows he's changed a lot-softer, and gentler and all. It's sweet.

So... it's 2 AM, where I'm at, haha. Will review more in the morning.

Hello from Review Marathon, um, still. Check out link to Review Game and SUPERFUN SHIT in my profile and stuff. This is review number... hurr. 146? That sounds right.

I like how they're both wasted. In the first scene. It's hilarious, and it pretty much sums up their lifestyle up to this point, AMIRIGHT?

I love how you jump from "great night" to "last night was fucking horrible." Haha. Way to sum up a hangover. It adds humor too, and stuffff.

Don't take so long to update again yea? Good story. I've done them all about Josh and Kay, now I'm headed to the one about Nick.
Keep going! lol

this is still so so good

Absolutely beautiful perfection. I'm recycling those superlatives Christian intrigues me...kinda makes me ponder if a younger Christiqn...all those many years ago might have a little summer romance of the rainbow variety before he had to put on his grown up shows and have a family and run a law firm... Lol. That's just wishful thinking. ;). Again, it was lovely writing, perfect Dow and pacing, dialogue ...as usual perfect...and I just adore johnny...

Can't say I'm a fan of Jack. I understand that Kay made some dumb mistakes woth Josh but Josh was perfectly fine with messing up his own life once he became 'an adult' so there's no reason for Jack to blow up at Kay. Johnny is awesome a always, and I'm glad Kay's dad wants to help Josh get his life together. :)

This is absolutely glorious. I've spent the better part of several hours reading and am completely and totally captivated. You write absolute perfection. Everything is so vivid so concrete so tactile so did I mention perfect. And both Josh and away are so wonderfully drawn, so thoroughly genuine and emotive and three dimensional. Utter perfection. Your dialogue is glorious and the flow and pacing is just ...I'm running out of superlatives. I'm completely enamoured and am only saddened that I sped through those 23 chapters nf now must wait for more. Fortunately there are more stories to read of yours. So I shall persevere until 24 arrives.

Hi there :] I'm kinda writing this review for LION so far... and to some extent MTY and BLU too... I hope you don't mind '

Either way BLU was actually the first of your stories I read, I stumbled across it and yeah. I liked it, and I actually got most of it by the end, which really proves it's that well written (this goes for MTY and LION too), both story wise and language wise (I'm a horrible "language-nazi").

Just... out of curiosity, what happend to Claudia? She is after all Nicky's mother, and isn't in LION at all...

Still, keep it up, you're great at this.

/Lisa

Thank you sooooo much for an amazing story. Started of initially not sure whether I was going to like it as normally angst is not my thing, but you have managed to make your characters come to life! Please keep writing and finish this story too