Reviews for The Lightning Room
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
nice work. keep writing
pointythings chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Ooh, this is very powerful. I love some of the lining, and the way you use fire to describe it all. The wording is very eloquent again, my only problem is that the lining gets weird in places. Anyway, the rest of it is really impressive. Yours in writing, ~pointythings~
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Deeply passionate.D.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
The frgamented sentences work really well. A great poem, well done.
Stones decay, words last