Reviews for Eleven Eleven
burkle chapter 8 . 10/10/2004
Love the story, it's wonderful. Love Remy, love Andrew. I can't wait to see what happens. Write more, soon. Please.
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 8 . 9/22/2004
So this chapter is beyond amazing. I think it's my favorite so far. And I'm sitting here trying to decide your favorite scene, but i honestly don't know. I'm thinking it's the one with Helene, because that totally shows a new side of Andrew and Remy's whole relationship, and her actual mentality or half-way stream of thought. I also think that Lola has a bad rep. Dude, she's like my idol, I wish I could be like her and not care about what anyone thinks and shit like that. I also wish that I could be Remy, even though she has a few issues, just so I could date Andrew. That would be fun! haha. Or maybe your favorite scene is the dinner one. That one was so well written, I like the bitter undertones when they mention Lola, and I like the fact that Remy goes and gets drunk afterwards. It's something she would do. Now that I'm thinking of it, is your fave scene could be the one when Remy and Andrew fight. That was an amazing turn of events. I liked that I wasn't expecting it. Overall, amazing chapter. I can't decide your favorite scene, cause the whole chapter was fantabulous. You rock!
Believe chapter 8 . 9/22/2004
Another great chapter. This story is really shaping up into something great. Remy is just so screwed and Andrew is just so... Andrew! Bless him. I think we're finally getting to the bottom of who Remy is and it's no wonder she's so screwed. O... I wonder what's going to happen next... Bring it on!
Tsukinani chapter 8 . 9/21/2004
Awesome chappie man. So do Andrew and Remmie stay together or is this just a thing that occurs once and never again?
Anyway update soon ne?
We Could Be Gone
Sharpie Marker chapter 8 . 9/20/2004
Hello! I love this story. Heh. Andrew. . . I have an obsession with the name Andrew, Daniel, and Christopher. Heh. Great story. I love it. It's a beautiful story. and I love how nice and long the chapters seem. . . At least to me. heh.
And yes - this is the girl who wrote Anything But Mine - but i'm stupid and changed my pen name. heh. *giggles insanely* I love the name Andrew! WEE! Update soon. *tries to act sane*
x Charm x
Baileyfish chapter 7 . 9/17/2004
I love this story! Remy is such an nteresting, real character. I can't for more.. to learn more about who she is. )
Tsukinani chapter 7 . 9/16/2004
Awesome story dude. update soon ne?
We Could Be Gone
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 7 . 9/15/2004
hello darling! I hope you enjoyed your free food at you grandparents anniversary. Free food is good food. haha. Okay, so this chapter, is special, very special. I like it, but I don't exactly know why. (not that there aren't like 950 things to like about it, but it's just something that I can't exactly put my finger on, that makes me like it. Maybe this review will help me find it, or maybe, knowing me and my utter slowness, I'll never be able to figure it out..) ANYHOW, I really liked the whole shopping thing. It was simple, but almost needed. And i loved Andrew's mom's advice 'be careful'. With Remy, it seems needed. Good job, I WANT TO READ YOUR FAVE SCENE! POST THE NEW CHAP SOON!
Believe chapter 7 . 9/14/2004
Uh oh... That can't be good! I'm almost scred to read the next chapter. Andrew, Remy AND his family in one room. It's a rescipe for disaster! Ah well. I am, as ever, wating with bated breath. Bring it on!
Em x
sieg45 chapter 7 . 9/13/2004
LOl good story... longer chapter faster updates... lol jk... keep on writing
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 6 . 9/6/2004
yay, I'm here to review. I want to start off by saying that I really enjoy andrew/ remy convos. There is something about them that makes you want to have a meaningful meaningless convo like they first it seems as if their convos are just convos, but then as you read you became enthralled in their world. you begin to understand that no conversation is just a conversation, it become something more- a glance into the past, an understanding as to why things are the way they are, a hope for the future. Either way, I love your conversations. They are just so in character and thoughtful. I also like Hayden, he's wise, but not too wise. and he seems to know what's going on which is cool. I'm loving this chapter, and I can't wait to read the next chapter, and then the scene that's your fave. YAY!
Molly chapter 6 . 9/5/2004
Another great chapter, Chris! The scene with Hayden made me a tad bit... nervous? I don't know; I felt like I was Andrew. It's like Hayden can see through Remy, and he is the first to point out her faults out loud, even though he doesn't know her. And like Andrew, even though you know about those faults, you're almost content with pretending they aren't there or they aren't a big deal. And it's worth holding onto Remy.
Molly: Yay for reviewing! Oh man, sick of Remy? Baby, you ain’t seen nothing yet. Thank you
Ain't seen nothing yet? That kind of excites me and scares me at the same time...
suburbian shakedown chapter 6 . 9/4/2004
i love this! i think i'm addicted.
Believe chapter 5 . 9/4/2004
Just to let you know that I'm still reading, still loving. Keep it up.
The more I read the more Remy bemuses and intregues me. She really does have a screwed up soul bless her. I don't envy Andrew the job of un-screwing it (so to speak...). Keep it coming...
Em x
Molly chapter 5 . 9/2/2004
I'm reviewing this chapter! Because it was so gosh darn good... not that the last one wasn't. During this chapter, I was feeling similar to Andrew, I'm kind of getting sick of Remy, but I still always want her to come into the scene, or know what's going on with her. Great chapter; I can't wait for the next!
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