Reviews for Eleven Eleven
StarCounter chapter 5 . 9/2/2004
Okay, time for the quickest, crappiest review ever. Pretty much just to let you know that I read it. Oh, and adore it thus far. That's always a good thing. Yep, Remy is sure leading to some destructiveness. I love this take on "Konstantine;" how if you didn't know it was associated with the song, you may not even pick up any little hints. *thumbs up* for you.
-Erin _
BoldScript chapter 5 . 9/2/2004
Well I read forgotten sheet music and ash recomended you and she was right, this story is awesome and its awesome how you made andrew the victim lol. I wonder whats really going on with remy. update soon. srry for the short review but im at work
newhaven chapter 5 . 9/1/2004
Hm...Lola? Dallie? This seems to be a continuation of When She Cries which I loved and adored, so naturally Im eternally grateful that you started writing again. Beatuiful style as always, and characters that are just flawed enough to be interesting, not annoying. Great story :)
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 5 . 9/1/2004
Okay this review will be longer and hopefully it will work. I can only pray. Okay so, yay, another Dulcie. Not much about her, but Dragon Tales is a respectable show, so therefore she‘s awesome-ness. I like Madison. She’s actually a cool younger sister, and you write her, her age, so that’s a plus. Sometimes writer’s tend to make a sophomore sound like they’re in elementary school or a senior in college, and that’s not cool. Obviously how you write her, is beyond good. (I’ve decided this review refuses to be coherent. I can’t help it) And how cute was that whole thing with the knee socks. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE ANDREW, TOO! I say Remy has very good taste. :) Random Side note: It seems that all of their conversations are meaningless, but meaningful. I really like the contradiction because it makes the story seem real. Like the whole knee socks thing seems like it could happen, with a real couple, and it makes the characters easier to relate to. (haha, it seems as if I had my own encounter with knee socks and a very hot Andrew, but I haven’t. Only in my dreams..) Aw, it’s sad with the whole drunken Remy thing. Partly, I think she gets drunk because she’s sad. Really sad, and she’s bulimic? That’s even sadder. Poor girl, I blame it on Lola (haha, I’m only half-kidding about that.) And now I feel bad for Andrew, it seems as if he has to clean up her mess for the millionth time. It must be tough for him to watch her make all these mistakes and not have any ability to prevent her from doing it again. It’s a tough situation he’s in. I love that the family was talking about Remy. It’s true that Andrew can’t get away from her, she’s EVERYWHERE. I’m trying to be profound, but I can’t. I do know that this was an AMAZING chapter. I absolutely loved it. I think I like Remy more and more as the story goes on. I obviously love Andrew to pieces. And yay for Helene in this chapter and the fact that she was ‘fucking starving’ and sober! haha. GREAT JOB!
Ashley-again chapter 2 . 9/1/2004
THEY CUT ME OFF AGAIN- HERE'S THE REST OF MY REVIEW! Well anyway, I have to cut this short because FP doesn't like me and will probably erase this too, but I
Ashley chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
You know what, I hate fp. I really do, because here I go writing this nice review and those sons of bitches delete it. And I'm left with a review that says 'wo-ness' which isn't what I said because it deletes double letters. FP should just die, because it prevented me from reviewing the correct chapter as well. Well anyway, I have to cut this short because FP doesn't like me and will probably erase this too, but I
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 4 . 9/1/2004
wo-ness (I
kirjava d chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
Very well written.
fevmoon chapter 4 . 8/22/2004
Very cool story. Quite intriguing. It pertains that element where you just keep waiting for the 'big thing' to happen. You're constantly holding your breath for the other shoe to drop. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Believe chapter 3 . 8/16/2004
Well... I'm going to have to do two chapters worth of reviews in one due to the fact that my stupid computer wouldn't let me into the second chapter till the third one was up. Nope I don't get it either. Anyway... Great couple of chapters. The characters are really coming into their own. I particualaly like Andrews discontent at how he's changeing but his inability to do anything about it. How I know that feeling. Remy is an intreguing soul. I can't wait to find out what's going on below her surface because your obviously building up to something... Hurry with the next part. I REALLY want to know what her Achilles heal is!
Em x
Molly chapter 3 . 8/13/2004
Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter/ story! Chris, as you already know, I love your style of writing! You capture your characters really well and keep their personalities throughout the story. I also really enjoyed the emo glasses reference in this chapter (:P Us emo kids are rad. Obviously.) and I like the last line and the way you finished the chapter. Anyway, keep posting more chapters VERY SOON because I am already hooked on this story.
Ashley chapter 3 . 8/13/2004
I'm too lazy to sign in. I'm a bum and proud hah! Well, this chapter was amazingness. I absolutely loved the glasses part. Very cute. And Remy continues to be interesting. I loved the last scene, and I HAD to listen to TBS when reading it. It sets a certain mood. And Helene is my idol. she is awesome. I'm trying to be profound but it's not working. anyway, great chapter..
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 2 . 8/13/2004
yay for the confidence and the psedo-confidence. I happen to love adding psedo in front of random words, forgive me. As for this chapter, it's of course AMAZING. I think I love Andrew. He reminds me of another character in a book. I can't remember his name or what I'm thinking of, but he reminds me of somebody so much, it's scary. Well anyway, I feel special that i was one of the only 2 people that got responses. THANKS! Great chapter. I like this new development and I'm starting to understand Remy. (LAST TIME THIS PIECE OF CRAP CUT OFF MY REVIEW. THAT SUCKS MAJOR ASS...)
punkcatwitissues chapter 2 . 8/10/2004
Well, I read this earlier, and I can't really remember what I had to say. Except that I liked it. The characters are so rich and well done. *runs to listen to Konstantine*
Sad Songs Remind Me chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
“Andrew.” Not Andy, not Drew. Just plain Andrew.
I must start by saying that I love that line. Immediately I thought that it was the perfect line, somehow it just made me understand Andrew’s personality more. And I love how you continue to develop the character of Andrew. He seems naïve, in an experienced way. He seems experienced, in an inexperienced way- As if he just learned to take things seriously and understand what he should do and what he shouldn’t. He’s almost trying to be a man, when he’s still a boy. It’s endearing and oh so perfect.
“But it was scary, and dreams never scared you. Because they always had the same ending, with you waking up to the comforting sight of a nightlight that illuminates safety back into your world.”
This I amazing imagery. I love the way Andrew thinks. It seems like even in his thoughts he has a sad sort of pseudo-confidence. I like him more and more as I read.
I particularly enjoyed the convo between Remy and Andrew about caffeine. It gives an almost personal, unique look into the character’s lives and personalities. It really shows how different their backgrounds make them.
I LOVE how their kiss is not perfect. I hate how some naïve, stupid authors (like me) think that every kiss is perfect. Obviously that is not true.
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