Reviews for His Essence
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I loved it. D.
R. Priest Campbell chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
I have now finish reading all your poetry to find that you scare me more than I myself. but this one catch me the more. May i, thank you. Dear fool. pity the fool who thought you clever, Dear wisdom, do not mock that fool that missed you, most fair, the blind has lost your face forever, but most foul, how can I see you while I kiss you. so the poor love of fools and blind i've proved you, for foul or lovely was an fool that loved you. ronald campbell
zt chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
"I am the tear that fell from his wondering eye." I'm in love with that line.
Ephemeral Dreams chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
Beautiful...simply lovely, flowing verse. The emotion speaks from the heart.
~ E.D.
Dystorque chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
I really like this. I guess I'm a sucker for the "I am" thing. Survive, poet, and thanks for the review
ShadesofBlue842 chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
this poem was...beautiful, there is no other word to describe it, very very good