|Reviews for The Assassin of Kevari|
| Prodigee123 chapter 20 . 8/22/2013
| Prodigee123 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
read later, sounds really good
| Catalineya chapter 20 . 4/17/2013
I absolutely love this story! I like the concept a lot and the way you work with the characters is really nice.
Also your writing is wonderful, it has few to no mistakes and very smooth lines. Really well. I hope that you eventually decide to finish the story and try to write again (at least this story) because i absolutely adore it, definitly one of my favourites!:)
| Shadowkiller176 chapter 20 . 2/27/2013
you need to finish this story. Amazing!
| sarasah chapter 20 . 2/1/2013
hello! I absolutely love your story and i am waiting for the continuation. i just read it and i think you should continue to write even if you have a writer block. with lots of drafts you can do it. just try. don't stop.
my mail is:
kiss from Portugal, Europe
| dreamon94 chapter 20 . 1/8/2013
it has been three years since your last update, maybe it's time to announce ABANDONED or finish it?
| mt chapter 20 . 11/25/2012
I just read this in one setting, and I must say... I think you have a gift for writing. This story is one of the best fictionpress stories I've ever read, and I truly hope that you continue writing it. Because something as beautiful as this story does not deserve to stand without an ending. Please, keep writing! As long as you're writing, I will be here reading :)
| Bluecoco100 chapter 20 . 6/8/2011
Can you just update already? Please!
| daydee chapter 14 . 12/23/2010
What. The. Hell. she just said she doesn't know what the word means, and then she tells him that she loves him. I have a problem with that. please change it.
| TheLadySongSerenade chapter 18 . 6/15/2010
YES! I haven't reviewed this chapter yet! This is good... Um... You have some issues with punctuation. That's all I really have to say as far as constructive criticism goes. As far as the rest goes- I hope you update really really really soon. I do know how hard it can be, especially after you've been out of touch with a story for a while, but I'm still just really really hoping...
| SlugHunter chapter 20 . 6/8/2010
:D you have renewed my love an fantasy! _
i love the story line and the characters, they're all maintain their individual characteristics which is nice. I love the fact that your writing flows and makes it soo easy to read :D
Personally i found the pace it's moving at is good, maintains interest, however as a consequence a lot of things we dont really come to terms with and bond with so when life altering situations occur we're not as emotionally invested u_u
just throwing some potentionally writing ideas around, perhaps start with ana's house, bandits... demons... traps... u_u a hardship brings people closer u_u dead ends... frustration... *shrugs*
Also i'd really liek to see more of Seth and his dragon :D and please dont hook josslyn and conrad up together T_T well.. just dont hook both pairs of siblings up please! T_T
Hope you get ur motivation back cause you are an amazing writer _
| un chien andalusia chapter 20 . 6/1/2010
Very entertaining and gripping tale. Cassandra's psychology is well mapped. I like that she didn't just wake from her fall out the castle window all hunky dory with the world. Much more realistic to still be angry with alexander and confused, humiliated, betrayed. What happens to the two on the journey to seek morana now? Alexander is an excellent swordsman so he should be of some help occasionally...
Hoping that you get out of the writer's funk and continue. C and A's chemistry is semi-latent but undeniable.
| mysterylucy chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I just started reading your story and i LOVE IT! It's brilliant!
| priscus-aoife chapter 20 . 5/29/2010
please update again soon! i love this story, can't wait to read more!
| Genuinely-xoxo-Superficial chapter 20 . 4/23/2010
It's been a long time, hasn't it! I've really outgrown fictionpress but I still receive email updates about authors I added to my 'alerts' list years ago. I just wanted you to know that this is one of the stories (maybe the only one? I can't remember!) I was really hoping would be finished, so I'm glad you've decided not to abandon it. So here's the deal- if you continue writing, I will continue reading! All the best :)