The only thing I noticed that bothered me is that your characters are always rolling their eyes. It makes them seem like teenagers. But I still love this story, no matter what.

Anyway, another great chapter. More to go...

It's been a while since I've read, and now I'm behind. Ack.

Anyway, nice chapter. Alexander and Cassandra remind me of Megan and Luke, always arguing. (Speaking of which, there *might* be a new chapter of WS in a few days).

Anyway, now I've got to catch up by reading the other chapters.

GREAT STORY! :D lol. sounds like a real legend lol. i hope my feeling that Alexander and Cassandra are gonna be together in the end are true, and also that they won't die in the end! ah! no! ive read some stories like that...i like them 2, its jus it makes me sad sometimes... lol.

I liked this chapter too...though I hate seeing Cassandra kill all those people. I'm glad you made it clear that Morana put her under a spell...I had been wondering why she didn't realize that what she was doing was horrible...

great job!

I have to say, your characters are wonderful. I really hope that finds some sense and leaves Morana...she's really starting to get on my nerves and Cassandra can do much better. Frenk and Giselle are like second parents too, you do a good job of characterizing them. My favorite though is still Alexander...keep up the good work.

I like the arguments.

I really LOVE this story. I really LOVE her character. She is very independent and brave. Gosh how I love her. I really WAINTING to know what will happen next to her! Alexander and Cassandra aren't getting along, do they! They sometime made me laughed hard! How's interesting of them. I just LOVE THEM so much! I REALLY LOVE THE PART that they are FIGHTING EACH OTHER! That's funny! It made me laughed! She seems really COOL and INTERESTING. Please keep POSTING MORE THIS STORY. I've been waiting for you to update this story for a very long time. The plot is really AWESOME. Excellent story! Good writing style. You describe really well. I really mean it! UPDATE MORE SOON!

"I don't want a wife," Alexander defended himself, running his hand through his thick locks. "Women are too much trouble." Haha, I love Alexander. He is by far the best character in your story! lol.

Some more missing commas:

I didn't think they'd ever leave Derk. . ."-there should be a comma after leave. But I'm really picky, and it's barely noticeable.

The bater between the guys was pretty cool. Overall, I this was one of my favorite chapters.

It's really sad to see what is happening to CAssandra, though this chapter was very good. I love how you continue mentioning the past, or people from the past. The Giselle and Drew part was very sweet- I don't know why, but they seemed like her family.

I found a few places where a comma would help, but it was nothing big.

Anyway, good work.

Ok, I decided. I don't like Morana at all- making Cassandra kill people is not cool. This chapter was really sad..you are doing a wonderful job with the characters. I only hope that we will get to see more of Alexander very soon.

update?

heyi just wanted to say thanx so much for writing this series, its kept me intrested from the very first word to the very last youve written. good luck with your writers block, i hope i goes away soon, i look forward to reading any new chaptersagain thanx alotand if you feel like replying back or if you need help with writers block my email address is ~kelly

No problem, actually I'm glad you haven't updated in awhile, I haven't had internet access for most of the summer. I'm currently catching up on reading people's stuff. My stuff's coming, but not for another week or so, sorry :(

Stop beating yourself up, jeez. Your hell of a lot better then I am and at least you manage to stay committed. Take your time working on this one, it's great and I think you'll keep/gain reveiwers but giving this story all the TLC you can.

Well, look forward to the continuation of the suicide mission!lol

Later,~Ffuffy~

Wow. This was an interesting chapter. I don't know what to believe anymore...if Alexander's family is good or Morana is...you have me thoroughly debating both, and I guess that's the mark of a good author. I liked this chapter, but i have a feeling that Cassandra is going to snap soon. After all, who could see their family being murdered and not do anything about it?

Cassandra is totally not dead. She can't be. Wow, you did a good job with this chapter. I loved the tension b/w Alexander and her...but she is not dead...I refuse to believe it.

Anyway, I though Sasha was Morana...good job.