Reviews for Half a Moon
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
How interesting you know the measure of you wants; most of us struggle with cravings for so much that's not really in our soul. Well expressed. m
eyluvmusic chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
This is a very intresting piece. Very orginal. Well done!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
very interesting... *looks up, sees no moon... sees ceiling and whacks head because no duh shes inside and cant see the moon from here... nor it is dark out...* meh... lol! i like this as well. i prefer half moons just because theyre prettier.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
Are you saying the full moon is too "wicked in illusions" so the half moon is more your style? Does get one to think and is nicely written.
namei chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
i may not quite understand..but you covered the phases of the moon and your responses..i Liked that
-na
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penumbral chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Hey, thank you for the AMAZING review, I really appreciated it! Anyway, I love this piece, its original, and it makes you think...also is 'cresset' a spelled-wrong-on-purpose, a typo, or some stunning word I'm just too slow to know? Hmm...anyway you're on my favorites!
Thanks again,
jalisco-psyche
Minus the Bear chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
That was a really good poem! Good job.
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
I like the symbolism here-very original and effective.