Reviews for Don't Say You Love Me |
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![]() ![]() It looks like a good story |
![]() ![]() I simply adore all your fics and I'm seriously crying lol and where I live its like 5 in the morning, mum is gonna kill me. Anyway, this was so beautiful and amazing. Your a fantastic author and I hope one day you will at least get some of this published ;). Anyway well done! Shokran bzzaf for sharing it with me, I mean thank you a lot! Lots of love -One of your biggest fans (Tasneem). |
![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH It's Matt! The guy who helped Ella with the bags or soemthing! ...at least I think that's him, unless a totally random new guy turned up. I was sort of hoping that he would like Ella (even if I knew next to nothing about him, except for the fact that he's nice enough to help her.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "plain old apple pie"? I LOVE apple pie! Lots more than any old fancy schmancy strawberry cake. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Man... This story is so captivating, i always forget to review because i am in such a hurry to get to the next chapter. Amazing..Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story was soo cute and soo sweet! I couldn't help falling in love with it! :)) |
![]() ![]() I can't say it wasnt kind of predicteble but it was fun to read and romantic so i like it specialy Zane chatracter |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful... you've gotten me addicted to reading your stories that i have to comment after finishing each one |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a very good story :) I love when I can feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside when it's over. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is still great. The one complaint I have, and this is just me being exceptionally picky, is that Zane rides a motorcycle. Now, I have absolutely nothing against motorcycles, but from what I have read about his personality so far, he doesn’t really seem like the motorcycle type of guy. I absolutely love how Sam’s family plays such a large part in it. It seems a lot of the time the author forgets the family exists and instead writes strictly about the friends of the main character. This is a refreshing change! Review courtesy of the Review Marathon. (Link in my profile!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter started out well. I liked the argument between the parents, it really helped to set up Sam’s home life. The end of the chapter, where Zane just throws her against the wall and starts making out with her, seems implausible - like it came out of nowhere and just didn’t belong. I’m still enjoying it though! Review courtesy of the Review Marathon. (Link in my profile!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how you start each chapter with the “Love?” and then the quote. They fit really well with the events contained in each chapter and sorta give a preview of what is to come. I don’t like the character of Zane very much… perhaps he will grow on me as I continue to read. There is something about him that seems too immature… even for high school. Please don’t take the criticism the wrong way, I am still enjoying the story! Review courtesy of the Review Marathon. (Link in my profile!) |