Reviews for Natalie And Jacob
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I remember when you told me about this. The weirdness of it for you.D.
alleysan chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Wow. I like this one too. It's... him... simple yet strong.
Tanika chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
another really beautiful poem. i will definitly make the promise to myself to read more of your poems later... they are so good.. but now i have a head... andi think i am going to take a nap or something.
elven-lady22 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Beautiful. Makes me think of another Jacob too..
am-not-ur-star chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Very creative very well writtena and very simple...Few words explained a lot
Coltrainne chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
heyy... this is a good poem. But one thing, it might be just me, but your phrasing of your verses could be less"scattered" Im not sure if thats your intention but it seems that the too scattered words make the readers harder to understand. as in harder to understand what you are talking about. But in all, great poem. Write more fiction stories though. GO!
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Beautifully written; I could picture every moment as if I were there.
Keep Writing!
changingstill chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
intresting...i like it
Kiran S chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
wow. this is a very unique poem. never read anything like it. ur a really talented writer and use strong words in your poems. i love it! keep it up!
The Ever Changing Tonks chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
good poem.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
Haunting image of being possessed by a scratch on a wall representing a couple unknown. Nicely done.