Reviews for Dr Lucas
Nickolaus Pacione chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
I will say you did a descent job for your first attempt in writing with Lovecraft's style of horror. I am a student of his style; and being able to write a Cthulhu Mythos story is a tough thing. Lovecraft has some big shoes to fill to pull off a story written in this style. You did good job writing it. You say you failed miserably is something you shouldn't be saying especially on a story like this. You are getting a writer who've been at the horror genre 14 years doing the review and I will say take some real pride in this story. You should make it a little longer though. Not many who are teens actually read Lovecraft, so I will commend you there.I got into Lovecraft at the age of 19 years old after listening to Metallica. This story is one you can make about 2300 words longer if you want to. I will say that. If you want to really get into Lovecraft's style, read some of my work. The story of Lovecraft's that really influenced me is Shadow Out Of Time. This story has a vibe that reminds me of The Thing On The Door Step